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| Subject: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:31 am | |
| {Due to the talk ive had with Tod, Since i haven't made a single post with him, I'd like to drop Stein for this character.} Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? If so how far have you gotten? If not please direct your attention to youtube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least. Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga. The anime is not canon. This is not our opinion. This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano. Ive read all the manga, seen all but the last OVA, I even recently read The Dawn and Cross fire. Name: Tethra Amara Nickname Poltergeist Info on her first and last name. - Spoiler:
Tethra, was said to be a crow goddess who also hovered above battlefields, and Scottish myth has the Cailleach Bheure, who often appeared in crow form. The association of the birds with death and war is an obvious reflection of its tendency to eat carrion, plenty of which is to be found in the aftermath of battle. This tendency led, eventually, to the persecution of the raven, as a harbinger of doom and destruction, and also to the common notion in modern European culture that the main attribute of Crow and Raven is their connection with the Otherworld. Upon Cuchulain's death, the Morrigan perched on his shoulder in the form of a raven
The feminine Amara is pronounced ah-MAHR-ah and may be derived from the Greek amarantos (eternal, unfading). Alternatively, it may be from the Latin amarus (bitter, sour). As a male name it is Sanskrit in origin, and means 'immortal'. It also refers to the number 33 as this is the exact number of the Hindu main deities, and to a type of tree. Amara is the name given to paradise in Ethiopian legends.
Age: 29 Gender: Female Physical appearance: Looking at her up close, you can tell she is of Latin descent. In terms of physical fitness, she would be considered a runt, to a body builder anyway, having almost no body fat and being covered in lean, tight muscle, built for quick movements and more of a "brawling" type body build. Tethra is around five-foot even with long bright pink, hair that comes down to her lower back. Pink eyes with black pupils that have dark circles under them from long hours of staying up, they seem to hold a deep hatred within them as they look out at the world around her. Holding her well toned body up are long slender legs with soft vanilla skin. Upon her torso, a large bust that adorns her chest which she keeps covered by nothing but a white tank-top, which does almost nothing to help keep it hidden. Her body is covered in twisting line-like tattoos which are mostly hidden by her clothes, however her back is bare of them, instead of twisting lines on her back, she bares a tattoo of a old story about a crow. Over her left eye is a scar or rather a indent, from when she was hit in the head when she was young. The tattoo on her back; - Spoiler:
Long ago, near the beginning of the world, Gray Eagle was the guardian of the Sun, Moon and Stars, of fresh water, and of fire. Gray Eagle hated people so much that he kept these things hidden. People lived in darkness, without fire and without fresh water. Gray Eagle had a beautiful daughter, and Raven fell in love with her. In the beginning, Raven was a snow-white bird, and as a such, he pleased Gray Eagle's daughter. She invited him to her father's longhouse.
When Raven saw the Sun, Moon and stars, and fresh water hanging on the sides of Eagle's lodge, he knew what he should do. He watched for his chance to seize them when no one was looking. He stole all of them, and a brand of fire also, and flew out of the longhouse through the smoke hole. As soon as Raven got outside he hung the Sun up in the sky. It made so much light that he was able to fly far out to an island in the middle of the ocean. When the Sun set, he fastened the Moon up in the sky and hung the stars around in different places. By this new light he kept on flying, carrying with him the fresh water and the brand of fire he had stolen.
He flew back over the land. When he had reached the right place, he dropped all the water he had stolen. It fell to the ground and there became the source of all the fresh-water streams and lakes in the world. Then Raven flew on, holding the brand of fire in his bill. The smoke from the fire blew back over his white feathers and made them black. When his bill began to burn, he had to drop the firebrand. It struck rocks and hid itself within them. That is why, if you strike two stones together, sparks of fire will drop out. Raven's feathers never became white again after they were blackened by the smoke from the firebrand. That is why Raven is now a black bird. Clothing of choice: Normally seen in a white tank top that is so small her natural gifts upon her chest pull it up so much her stomach is revealed, she also wears black military style pants covered in multiple pockets and straps. She wears a ring around her left ankle and a pair of fingerless, black leather gloves to protect her hands. On her feet are a pair of custom made black combat boots that have the image of a skull sewn on the side, on both boots, that have a metal plate on the bottom that runs along the entire under side of the shoe, from the heel all the way to the toes. To go with this look she keeps her hair down and lets it flow freely. Weaponry of choice: Tethra prefers to use her natural abilities in battle but in terms of firepower, Amara doesn't screw around with handguns since she's a horrible shot. Instead of handguns, she brings the big guns to the table. She's almost always seen carrying around a Remington 1100 Tactical Shotgun in 12 gauge— has an eight shot capacity and the most common rounds Amara utilizes are blessed buck shot to make up for her poor aim, she doesn't seem to have to much trouble firing it even with her puny size, due to her training. - Spoiler:
In close combat she normally uses two carbon steel machetes, each one has a two inch long handle for one handed use and has a blade length of 15 inches each. She normally keeps both of them on the back of her waist. - Spoiler:
Race: Special Human Abilities: Tethra is one of the worlds strongest Psychokinetic's, argumented threw genetic mutation and a natural ability to make matter move at the micro or macro (visible objects, life forms, she's even able to manipulate air molecules to some extent) levels; move, lift, agitate, vibrate, spin, bend, break, or impact) things with her mind, the ability she was born with called Psychokinesis. Able to lift objects with her mind, send them flying, bend them, or even crush them to some extent when angered. Utilizing the power of the mind and by manipulating physical energy in the room around her. However, this is limited to certain weight limits and density levels. While normally not angered and calm, she is able to lift most things that weight up to or less then 165 pounds in weight, for simply lifting them and throwing them across the room at someone, and even utilize small sharp objects, such as nails, pens, needles, or other small sharp objects and send them flying toward someone at speeds barely enough to stab into flesh. .. However, her limits vary when angered, fueled by rage and anger, her weight limits increase, allowing her to lift most things around 350 pounds or less and send it flying at someone. However, bending things with her mind takes much more concentration and focus then simply lifting something and throwing it. She can even cock guns and have them fire without touching them. Bending small things such as hollow pipes and small pieces of metal {cant be more then 2 inches thick}. Like lifting objects her limits increase with her anger, while pissed off her mental ability increases, allowing her to snap 10 inch long pipes in half and even bend and break metal 4 inches thick, though doing this takes a massive mental drain on her, and she'll most likely just send what ever she picks up flying at someone. Crushing something with her mental ability takes a much more massive drain on her, almost to the point of collapsing or fainting, it is only possible when in a enraged state as well, crushing, or otherwise completely destroying something with a mental wave, for her to do something like this it would have to be something rather small, such as a small chair, a desk or small table, she can even crush small handguns and even larger ones if enraged. Along with the ability to move objects with her mind and bend them, she also has the ability to create a mental wave or force field to protect herself from close range attacks, the field or "wave" can be seen threw very vivid ripples that form in the air, almost like heatwaves but much more clearer, this cannot be used to block bullets however, it is merely used to knock people off of their feet. Though this can act as a sort of "Wall" against flame that put off heat or be used to push away smoke or gas, while bullets fly at a too fast of speed to be stopped by something like this, flames are very easily moved by the slightest breeze, thus by manipulating the physical energy in the room with her mind, and threw deep concentration, she is able to create a energy field to push back against said things, though the more force that pushes against the mental wave, the weaker it becomes, it also takes a very large drain out of her to keep it up for very long {Keeping it up for more then three post's will result in a very massive headache and blurry vision}. Her more tiring and stronger abilities, She is also able to create "Mental-bullets", in other words strong impacts made on a solid object by compressing the air molecules, which makes them visible by forming strong ripples in the air around her and even as they move, like all her other mental attacks, around her to form high velocity air bullets, strong enough to indent metal up to 3 inches thick and even break wooden doors to pieces. Using these air bullets take a massive drain on her mental stability, often giving her massive headaches and eye pains, some times her eyes will even bleeds as if she's crying blood, she'll get massive migraines, get dizzy, blurry vision, and even unbalanced enough to fall over. Due to the stress they put on the brain, of course her mental abilities, such as the mental wave/force field, and the mental bullets, have a range on them, the mental wall {force field} has a range {that she can push it forward} of 6.56 feet or 2 meters, while the mental bullets can only travel forward about 5 feet before becoming nothing by a harmless breeze, however she can only use about 3 mental bullets before the migraines kick in, after that, 2 more would be her limit, making a total of 5 before passing out. She can even influence Random number generators, dice rolls, and even coin tosses. While her natural abilities are what she normally uses, she will go hand-to-hand due to combat training she gained threw the knights, though its mostly on instinct while fighting hand-to-hand and more of a brawling type style of fighting, its the same when she uses her machetes in battle, there's not really a style to it, just instinct. After all her limits are reached {limits stated above} her abilities will begin to weaken and fail, if she continues to push herself and continually use of her mental ability in a battle can even go as far as the cause brain damage and damage brain cells, even as far as shutting her brain down and killing her. Also, due to the fact that they make very visible ripples in the air, they can be seen and dodged.Organization: Unaffiliated Personality: Tethra has developed a rather bleak, almost nihilistic outlook on life, relying only on her own power, skills, and ability. She does not believe in god nor emotions, often saying that they are pointless for a person to have, however she does say that dreams are essential. One of her funnier aspects of her is being quite forgetful, implying that her brash attitude caters to her stupidity; one moment unable to recall remembering someone she met only minutes ago, let alone killing them. Tethra is very competitive, strong willed, stubborn, impatient, easily bored, and extremely ill-tempered. Unlike most people, she is undiplomatic, believing in the use of brute force and coercion to get her way. In contrast to this, she is revealed to be highly ticklish. She is also a heavy smoker and is often seen with a coffin nail in her mouth. During battle She is a merciless killer without a conscience who will, ordered to or not, kill anyone at the slightest provocation, even unarmed civilians, hell, she'll even kill the animals in the area out of sheer boredom. However, she seems to be loyal to Rone due to the fact that he actually provided a way out. Rank: N/A Biography: Born in Italy, she was raised by a normal christian family, well almost christian family, her Scottish father was a scientist and didn't really believe in god, while her mother, a "full time catholic", helped out at the church down the road from the house. Strangely, her pink hair was natural, which confused her parents, and even her eyes, but the doctor couldn't tell them anything other then it was a birth defect, cause he really didn't know. Once they brought her home it was just like a normal family, until she turned two. On her second birthday she was placed in her room so her parents could set up the table for the birthday dinner, however, while isolated in her room, the young Amara discovered something. While reached for her bottle, that was on the far side of the room by the bed, she struggled but her arm wouldn't reach, strangely enough, just as she began to cry, the bottle shot off of the dresser drawer, flew across the room, hit her in the head and fell inside her crib, along side her falling beside it holding her head and crying in pain. Her mother soon bursts threw the door to see what was the matter when she froze in horror at the sight, all of Amara's toys, her baby bottle, and even her teddy bear were swirling around her crib as she continued to cry. Her mother, almost completely frozen in fear, called for her husband who also came rushing down the hallway from the kitchen into the room, only to get smacked in the head with a toy train he just bought her for her birthday. After regaining his balance, and almost falling out of the room onto the floor, he too stood frozen with his wife as they watched the toys form a mini tornado around their child. Thinking it to be some sort of demonic possession, her mother ran for their room to the bible, while her father, a bit skeptical about anything concerning demons, though it was so strange he really couldn't wrap his brain around it, made his way into the room while at the same time getting pelted with toys as he made his way closer to his daughter. After finally making it threw the small hurricane of toys, her crying stopped as he picked her up, seconds later her mother running in, bible and phone in hand. Her parents were.....freaked out to say the least, although her father was a scientist he really couldn't explain it, her mother immediately jumped into the whole "Demonic" thing and had her baptized immediately the next day, she felt relived afterward and took her daughter home. Life went one with the occasional outbreak of things flying off the wall, T.V. channels changing by themselves, even the combination to her dads safe on the wall strangely popping open. Oh the day of her 6th birthday, another outbreak in her ability happened as the small desk in her room suddenly exploded into splinters and lifted into the air before flying into the far wall after she came home from school, her parents rushed in and later found out it was due to the kids in her class who were bullying her due to her weird hair. However, the next day at school in the playground, the other kids began to bully her again despite what the teacher said. One child even threw a rock at her, which hit her in the side of the temple, almost knocking her out. Though only a little blood was shown, her hate for them that she had been building up suddenly unleashed itself in a massive mental blast, rippling threw the air like heatwaves, it blew the children back across the playground, breaking a few bones in the process. However, she didn't stop at this, after tossing the kids across the yard, she wrecked the playground. Her parents immediately came and picked her up after listening in horror at what she did to the other kids, and took her home. Amara was left in her room all alone, sitting on her bed as she listened threw the stillness of the house to her parents conversation about what to do. Listening to their argument about whether to send her to a mental ward where they could "Help" her, send her to her father lab, or just all in all giver her away, made her feel even more isolated then any other time in her life. Hearing her own parents talk about sending her away was heartbreaking. After stewing in the silence of her room, she sat on her bed with her legs pulled to her chest, hugging them and just blankly staring at the wall. She didn't move for three days, she didn't even eat, sleep, or go to the bathroom. Her eyes began to glaze over, dark bags formed under them, eventually she went insane, trying to figure out why she had these abilities, why she was cursed. Raking her brain over it for days, even weeks. Of course the lack of sleep didn't help either, her parents even began to get more worried, their daughter quite literally looked possessed, the black bags under her eyes, the tired lanky body language, the twisted, almost psychotic look in her eyes. This continued for a little over a year, she hardly slept, and when she did it was only for a few hours, on the day of her eight birthday she practically went insane, her mentality snapped after the year of almost complete isolation from her parents, who mostly only talked to her or even saw her was when she came to eat, and from the other children at the school, she ended up blowing holes in the walls, breaking the table, chairs, and even killing both her mother and father, she even broke a gas mane which cause fire to the house due to her fathers lit cigarette. Standing in the living room of the burning house, her parents bodies at her feet, blood splattered over he tiny body, she went completely insane. However, since her father secretly helped the Knights of the Holy Light who had descent into corruption with their research, after the murder of him and his wife, their house burning down and Amara left sitting in the front yard, they took her in. They heard only what she could do from what her father told them, deciding to test this theory, and increase their soldiers, they put her threw multiple tests to see if her abilities were true. However, most of the tests went wrong, instead of moving the object they told her to, she ended up tossing the man who was giving the test across the room and into the wall with a mental blast. Though this was intriguing, the child needed to learn how to control her abilities if she would be of any use. To help the child learn to control her abilities, they developed a special type of helmet that covered her entire head, it was build to help maintain and stabilize her brainwaves, even when angered. Though it was a prototype helmet, it was needed. The helmet did help but very little, it took months for the young girl to be able to move things that see wanted, without random mishaps happening, such as a personnel flying into the wall. She was forced to keep the helmet on most of her time in training, even while sleeping. She trained day and night, up until her 15th birthday when her mental power grew so much that, during a test to lift a large block of steel, the piece of metal on the helmet over her right eye blew out and broke the right side of the mask, sending multiple cracks threw the reinforced steel that it was made out of, the mental blast was so strong that it send the two scientist in the room off of their feet, across the room, and slamming into the reinforced glass on the double sided mirror. Obviously just doing mental training wasn't enough, while making a new helmet for her, she was given a bit of physical training as well, to help build muscle, after all, both were important. It took months to make a new mask, one of stronger metal. She was basically raised by the old knights, but she felt no attachment to them. If anything she was using them to help control her ability, which worked out well enough that by the time she turned 20 her abilities were almost under her complete control, even without the help of the helmet they made her. A few days after achieving this, and using the current events of whats happening to the knights, she went on a rampage while the labs chain-of-command was in chaos and eventually escaped the lab she was being kept in. After leaving it and killing just about every one in her way, she made her way around Scotland looking for things to pass time with, being homeless and stealing food is all she could really do after getting away, until she stumbled upon Rone who actually offered her away out of said life. RP sample:- Spoiler:
Though out the clean hallways of white tile and pale walls were doors. Multiple doors lined the hall as if it were a prison, however, in each room were multiple people in white coats holding test tubes and clipboards, in every room if was no different, this was a lab secretly funded, nobody really knew what they were studying or what they were after. Two men made their way down the hall, one holding a clipboard and a pen, the other looking threw a small stack of papers. Okay..... We gotta do a psychological profile on a subject... This will be her third one.. One of them said as they both turned the corner, flipping one of the pages over. Professor Jackson, Her room should be at the end of this hall, right? Prof. Jack shook his head and flipped the second page over before reaching into his lab coat pocket with his other hand, fiddling around for the keys. Yeah... Im reading the recommendations for it right now.... Says to put all sharp and blunt objects into the container outside the room before entering..... Apparently shes gotta strange ability... They both walked for a little while longer and turned another corner, coming to a door with metal bars on it, a few padlocks and a chain across it. The door was heavy, and what looked to be made of steel, but it had multiple dents in it and looked worn. I-is all this....really needed for one subject...? Jackson and his assistant made their way toward the door and pulled out everything in their pockets and placed them in the tub beside the door and proceeded to use the key to unlock the padlocks and all the other restraints on the door, just as they were about to remove the last of the many padlocks they head what seemed like singing, though it was very low and soft, it was most definitely a song.
What...the hell? I cant tell what the words are..... Ah well. Jack said, lazily pushing open the heavy door with a slight grunting breath. As they both entered the room it was very dull and dark, like a prison cell. The walls were cracked, covered in holes and writing, small drops of blood and dust. In the corner of the room sat a small child on a dirt mattress with long pink hair, a white sleeveless t-shirt and black shorts. Covered in dirt, hugging her legs to her chest and blankly staring at them. Jackson hesitated a moment before walking in and pulled over the small chair that was beside the door and sat down in the center of the room, a bit confused, this girl was the subject... It was surprising to say the least. Hi there.... Whats your name...? he asked, leaning forward a bit to get a closer look at her, she just stared at him, a blank expression on her face. I heard you singing... It sounded nice, would you sing it to me..? Once again, he didn't get an answer but rather his assistant behind him fell over and seemed to have a loss of breath as the pen he was holding flew from his hand and began to float around the room at the call of Amaras mental ability, before turning around and pointing at the assistant, before shooting forward and hitting him in the neck, stabbing into the soft flesh and sending a stream of blood spewing out in a crimson arch, spraying over the walls as he struggled to breath, moments later falling lifelessly on his back in a puddle of his own blood. Jackson jumped out of his chair and turned to see his now dead assistant and turned back toward Amara, who was still staring at him. He bolted toward the door which shut on its own before he reached it, trapping him inside.
After banging on the door a few times and trying to pull it open, Amara finally spoke, still sitting in her corner of the room. I was bored until you guys came 'round. This room is in the very back of the compound...that door is also around five inches thick... No one can hear you... G'bye! The pen seemed to rip itself free of the second scientists neck muscle and lift into the air, blood dripping from the tip before pointing toward him. Amara lifted her hand and at the exact moment she snapped her fingers, the pen shot forward, flying into Jackson's neck who quickly fell to the floor in the same manner as his assistant. Standing up from her corner and making her way toward the door, she stepped on the bodies as the door opened itself, making her way out into the hallway, she had only been out of that room for training, and now, if she did it right, she could get out! She ran down the hall before coming to a sliding stop to the corner and peeked around it, she knew her way around the place because of all the times they transported her for her training. Things have gotten borin' around here.... Time to cut loose... Last time i saw the storage area for the guards was.. She took off down the hall way as fast as she could and took a right, dashing down the plane white hall way, her bare feet slapping against the white tile. Moments later she turned a second corner and came to a stop so fast she almost slipped.
Peeking around the corner, she saw one of the guards making their rounds and waited for him to go into one of the rooms before bolting off down the hall again toward the storage area. She eventually came to a thick blue door and tried to open it, it was locked, she figured it would be. However, after getting severely aggravated with it after a few minutes of struggling to open it, she finally took a step back as her hair slowly began to lift into the air, the air molecules compressing around her and formed what looked like ripples in the air before it suddenly shot forward, with a loud crash that echoed through the halls, a giant dent so large formed on the door as if his by a battering ram, the door sunk in on itself as it was blown inward and landed with a loud metallic clang. Well... Louder then I wanted but....It worked... she said to herself as she ran in, looking at the small amount of weapons that were on the walls. Of course, this is where Amara looked like a kid in a candy store, clean clothes hung on coat-hanger's, combat boots lined the bottom of the lockers, and best of all, guns. She figured she had a few minutes before the other guards actually made it all the way here, but the one she just past was already bursting out the door in the hallway and running toward the storage room.
Amara lifted her hand out and focused on the wall, as if it was obeying a order from a higher being, the shotgun on the far wall shot off the rack and into her hand, which she spun around with it and aimed it out the door toward the hall, pulling the trigger back, the guard didn't even have time to draw his own weapon before multiple pellets from the buckshot flew into to his upper torso, knocked him off his feet and left him laying on the white tile floor. Time to change... She sat on the bench that was right next to her and put on a pair of the black combat boots beside one of the lockers, after putting the black cargo pants and switching her shirts out. Finally with new clothes and a way out, she lifted the shotgun onto her shoulder and stepped out the room, the sound of footsteps were already close, and sure enough, multiple guards came charging down the hallway to see what was going on. Hello boy'z!, she said, bringing the shotgun out, it seemed to cock itself at Amaras mental call, as if an invisible hand was pumping it for her, and fired a spray of buckshot down the hall, two of them went down, one of them fell to one of his knees holding his arm, while the other two tripped over the ones the fell over. Not to self: When in a tight hall way, dont cluster together! Amara held out her other hand behind her as a handgun flew off the table from the storage room behind her, all due Amara's mental ability. Sorry guys! You just checked into the Hell Motel and the boogieman's doin' room service! She yelled, jerking the handgun forward and letting off three rounds down the hall way, one of them missed, the other two barely hit their mark because they were so close together and the last two who were almost to their feet dropped back to the floor.
Making her way down the hallway, shotgun resting on her shoulder with her left hand on the grip, and pistol in the other hand. She eventually made it to the pile of guards that just ran to their deaths and lowered the tip of the shotgun barrel to the back of the surviving ones head and grinned before pulling the trigger, blood splattered on the floor along with parts of skull and brain matter. Stepping in the blood as she made her way down the hall way, bound for the exit that was a few hallways down. However, one of the doctors that worked on her for the longest time made a big mistake by coming out of the room down the hall as she turned the corner, and didn't even get time to register what happened as buckshot tore into his knee cap and dropped him to the floor with a bloodcurdling scream of pain. Crawling away from the now advancing Amara, he reached into his pocket and grabbed a radio, but before he could speak into it, 10 more pellets flew into his hand and the right side of his cheek as they spread out, blowing it out of his hand and forcing him to cry in pain once again. Ya cant check out without my permission, Doc. Don't worry though, I talked to the devil, he has a whole theme park set out for ya.. Amara said as she was now within 10 feet of the poor doctor who was now looking down the barrel of a Remington 1100 tactical shotgun. W-wait a second! I-i didn't treat you that badly! Did I?!
Amara pressed the barrel to his forehead and grinned, her pink hair covering her left eye, her right eye widened with excitement, her finger twitched as she stopped herself from pulling it for the moment. I dunno, Doc... Sleepin' on a filthy bed, no change of clothes... The only thing you bastards gave me was food, and it sucked! So... G'bye! He called for her to wait but was interrupted as she pulled the trigger back, the buckshot hit him with so much force his body jerked back and skidded along the floor a few inches before stopping. Just then the alarm went off, a large siren filled the halls as all the doors flew open, multiple scientists rushing out to get to the exit, the other guards also mixed in with the crowed. Amara suddenly bolted down the hall toward the exit a few yards down. The guards knocked a few people over trying to chase after her, she bolted around a corner and stopped, spun around on her heels and swung the shotgun out, just as one of the guards turned the corner, he came face to face with the barrel and soon hit the floor after the gunshot went off, spraying blood all over the floor. Pulling it back and glancing at it, it cocked it self just as she commanded it mentally and raised the pistol in her right hand and aimed it around the corner, blindly firing into the oncoming crowed, bullets whizzed by peoples heads, people dropped to the floor dead, other in pain.
Finally dropping the now empty handgun, she stepped back out around the corner jerked her Remington back out and fired down the hall once more, sending multiple pellets threw the air into the crowed of people, which many of them fell to the floor as one or two pellets pierced their bodies. Okay, to hell with this! Time to get the hell outta here! She turned around and took a few steps toward the door when she felt a gun press against the back of her head. Drop your weapon and show me your hands! Now! She sighed, and lifted her hands up, carelessly dropping the Remington on the floor before spinning around, using her arm to knock the barrel of the mans own shotgun to the side, which the motion forced him to pull the trigger, shooting the wall, only to get a fist slammed into his face. She moved her hands out into the air as both of the shotguns flew from the floor into her hands, each one cocking itself as she lowered them both down toward the man and pulled the trigger, in a mix of Buckshot and a large lead slug, the mans shirt was ripped to bits, his chest blown open, and a massive pool of blood began to form on the floor. Of course, the kick from firing two shotguns at once hurt both her arms like hell, she dropped one of them and ran toward the door.
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:38 pm | |
| The only thing I have a problem with is what I already talked to you about it. I have to think about whether I'd approve this or not. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:58 am | |
| Been two days.... Bumpage activate!! |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:56 pm | |
| I know you didn't mean anything by it Mike but please don't go bumping your sheet. As for this character, I will be honest. It takes me a bit out of my comfort zone regardless of everything that you have done to limit her. I see way too much potential for this to turn ugly if this character is approved. Again, maybe it is just me but still. My one stipulation before I can vote either way on this is that it needs to be more fatal for her to use it continually. It needs to be something that doesn't just cause a migraine but can actually cause brain damage and perhaps due to telekinetic energy, literally fries her brain cells and decreases her power and ability by doing so. Again, hopefully this is just e being a little bit paranoid about that sort of thing but... |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sun Aug 21, 2011 3:08 pm | |
| - Artisto Perfetto wrote:
- I know you didn't mean anything by it Mike but please don't go bumping your sheet. As for this character, I will be honest. It takes me a bit out of my comfort zone regardless of everything that you have done to limit her. I see way too much potential for this to turn ugly if this character is approved. Again, maybe it is just me but still. My one stipulation before I can vote either way on this is that it needs to be more fatal for her to use it continually. It needs to be something that doesn't just cause a migraine but can actually cause brain damage and perhaps due to telekinetic energy, literally fries her brain cells and decreases her power and ability by doing so. Again, hopefully this is just e being a little bit paranoid about that sort of thing but...
Not just you. Those are a few of the concerns I talked about. Additionally, from the way she's used in the chat box (regardless of that affecting RP in no way, shape, or form), I see a lot of god mod potential. I've watched you do things such as tossing grenades back (well within her weight range), and with how you describe her being able to turn practically anything into high-speed death bullets of doom, it's just too much. Full on psychics in a world without much psychic powers is hard to do. If you still want to try and do this, be my guest. Just know that we're going to scrutinize her heavily and, if she is approved, will probably be much different than when you first imagined her. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:35 am | |
| @ Arty, i added what you suggested, if she over uses it she can destroy her own brain cells and cause brain damage to herself if it is over used. I also had a talk with Tod before he stopped being a mod or something.... or is it Ridl... i dunno anymore. But I also had a talk with him and Amaras ability, she wont be able to throw people across the room unless their NPC's that aren't really controlled, if another person is actually controlling them, {like tod is/was doing at the knights castle} she will actually have to fight them.
@ Ridl: To be fair, no one really uses grenades in battles on here, at least not much anyway. And you cant really gauge how i can use her by what i do in the c-box with her. Just because you see godmod potential in the c-box isn't really fair to gauge on her. Its not like i said she can catch bullets with her mind. You can take Enrico maxwell and put him against alucard in the c-box and anything can happen. Its a place to mess around. Seriously man... I call B.S. True, this is one of my more "powerful" characters, but other mental abilities have also been approved, and one was FAR more OP'd then this one. But that was due to the other staff, cant really put that on y'all. I also lowered the speed at which she can throw things. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:26 am | |
| Not only can this OC harm others and knock them off their feet without having to physically touch them...but she can create force fields to protect herself from close range attacks and cock guns and have them fire without touching them?
'Along with the ability to move objects with her mind and bend them, she also has the ability to create a mental wave or force field to protect herself from close range attacks'
I can almost picture this OC using the force-field ability whenever she engages in close-combat with someone. I'd imagine other members would find these abilities incredibly bothersome to come in contact with during RP and even with the weaknesses you've given her, I still see godmod potential.
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:02 am | |
| I'd be more inclined to believe you if there weren't all those pesky "facts" contradicting you. In recent times (the span of a month) at the Knights' castle, grenades have been flying all over the place. Jean and O'Conner were killed by grenades. Also, stop using the, "But they got to do X, so I should be able to do X too." It makes you come off as a brat and it's very annoying.
I said that the chat has no affect on the RP, so you don't have to tell me that. What I meant was when I come in and you're play fighting with others, I see you tossing grenades back in peoples' faces and whatnot (one of my concerns). Also, and while this isn't the biggest concern, I just realized that it isn't very believable for her to be in the Knights at all. They'd have deployed her in RP for one, and for another, why do they need her when they had Adara?
Going to hold off on the vote for a bit longer. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sat Aug 27, 2011 8:39 am | |
| - Ridl wrote:
- I'd be more inclined to believe you if there weren't all those pesky "facts" contradicting you. In recent times (the span of a month) at the Knights' castle, grenades have been flying all over the place. Jean and O'Conner were killed by grenades. Also, stop using the, "But they got to do X, so I should be able to do X too." It makes you come off as a brat and it's very annoying.
No where did i say that "Well, Adara go approved so approve Amara! No where. If it sounded like i was Implying that, then i apologize. I was just saying it wouldn't be hard to pull off a psychic like you stated above. And To be honest, aside from the battle at the knights castle, thats the only place ive ever seen grenades used, but that could just be me. But, then again it makes sense to bring grenades if yer going to attack a friggin' castle. - Quote :
- I said that the chat has no affect on the RP, so you don't have to tell me that. What I meant was when I come in and you're play fighting with others, I see you tossing grenades back in peoples' faces and whatnot (one of my concerns). Also, and while this isn't the biggest concern, I just realized that it isn't very believable for her to be in the Knights at all. They'd have deployed her in RP for one, and for another, why do they need her when they had Adara? .
Rone said it was fine if I made her a Experiment for the knights since he was the one who had the knights before marcus, i figured it could be a old project or something. I dunno. If ya dont like then dont approve it. I can always go back to being Stein, i just thought it would be fun have a Psychokinesis character. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sat Aug 27, 2011 11:45 am | |
| Most people have a grenade or two on them to start with if they're a soldier character. And if it's not grenades, it could be throwing knives. Pipes. Sticks. Rocks. Nearly anything they could throw, you could bounce back at them. And, once again, your ability to make pretty much anything a bullet. Even with your edit to how strong it is, they're still having a bunch of office supplies fly at them, and if it hits an eye or something, then they're fucked.
I don't want to have to do this, and it's not that you haven't been compliant, but there's just so much potential for god modding and such that I can't approve a character like this. I really don't know how you'd be able to keep her abilities how they are, aside from nerfing her to the point of a parlor trick magician. My suggestion would be to scrap her in this form and try again with a different set of powers.
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:44 pm | |
| Okay, i know u already disapproved it but what the hell? If i hit them in the eye? Anybody can hit someone in the eye and fuck someone over. How the hell does that even fall in consideration?
Too lazy to swap accounts. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sat Aug 27, 2011 3:37 pm | |
| I mean since you said that it can barely pierce skin. That wouldn't matter if you aimed for their face, since it would pierce their soft and vulnerable eye jelly. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Sat Aug 27, 2011 4:37 pm | |
| Approvals: 1 Disapprovals: 3
In light of some of the other comments about this character, I'm sorry but I am disapproving this as well. |
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| Subject: Re: Amara Tethra Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:03 pm | |
| Michel says to scrap her. He's actually going to do something with Stein. |
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