Operative Benny Giovanni remake [Death by heart rip]

DEATH:  When the Hellsing manor was infiltrated by the murderous vampire Almos Lorand, Benny bravely fought against him before finally having his heart torn from his body.

guys, i appoligize if ive become a burden with business like this.  im not a troll, i never intended to get on anybodys nerves, which i think its too late for that.  i wanna say thank you for staying with me instead of saying f_ it & kicking me off the site.

anyways, ive put some serious changes into my character sheet & hopefully this will be good



Name:   Benny Giovanni “The Godson” (think of The Godfather:  Italian-American with a submachine gun, a thompson is actually a submachine gun, so is an MP5; teenage instead of middle-age)


Age:   18


Gender:   Male


Physical Appearance:   Crazy is about 5’ 8” in height.  His body isn’t very bulky at all.  He is a bit muscular, however; call it “skinny-buff”.  He has a whitish-yellow skin tone.  His feet are kind of big, so his shoes stick right out from his bootcut jeans.  He has bony hands & fingers.  He is Italian-American, with facial features packed tightly & low on his face, so it looks as if he has a big forehead.  He has deep blue eyes which aren’t very wide open.  His hair is brunette with a lot of soft spikes in it.  His ears tend to stick out a bit.


Clothing of Choice:   Benny wears bootcut jeans all the time.  There are some guys out there who like skinny jeans and look cool in them, Benny is not one of those guys.

For his upper body, Benny wears a black trench coat-type of jacket, like the kind with a draping back and pointy shoulders, over a plain white t-shirt that fits a bit snug with his body.  

On his head, he wears a black fedora with a white ribbon encircling the crown.  He is also wearing a pair of large, chrome-colored shades, like the kind sheriffs wear.  He likes the cover-up that sunglasses tend to give to the wearer, the brightness-protection the grant, and an accessory that just about changes the outfit almost completely.  He loves hats, as in the unusual kind.  He doesn’t like baseball caps so much, so he likes hats that just stand out, for example hunting caps, boonies, & straw cone hats (the Asian kind).

He has a lavender scarf tied around his neck that widens toward the ends.  This scarf gives him a sort of vagabondish flair, as he is a bit of a wanderer and already looks like a traveler with his coat.

Benny carries a satchel around with him to carry other supplies on him or for pick up, varying based on the situation.  He even likes to carry a small cannoli (Italian pastry, it is dough that is baked in the orientation of a tube, then stuffed with frosting) or two in a cooled plastic bag, which he likes as a victory snack that he sometimes will let it sit there hanging in his mouth for a few seconds at first, imitating that cigar-smoking of mission accomplished.

His belt carries some mags for his MP5A3, a holster for his M1911, & the scabbard for his katana.  He also has a bandolier that holds some mags for his M1911.  He set up his mag locations strategically, as an enemy that knows well about firearms with know his carrying a submachine gun if he sees those kinds of mags flat on the chest, which Benny’s intentions involve the element of surprise.

Benny also utilizes a type of arm covers, in which these are prismic-shaped with a metal shell and he can slip his arm right in.  These arm covers provide a level of protection from opposing forces.  They also have a pocket up front that stores his kunai, so that he has them at easy reach.  These covers also lie over black gloves that have pads on the back of the hand & the front of the fingertips.  These pads work out, because he uses the back of his hand to shoo weapons or fists/feet away from him, as well as Benny’s parkour style of breaking falls & travel that often involve the sliding of his fingertips.  Imagine doing that on concrete with bear hands…

And finally for his feet, Benny wears basketball style shoes, in which appear triangular being viewed from the side.  The ones he is using have hard rubber on the back of the heel as well as a slab-shaped sole.  These have red decoration on the toe, tongue, the ankle, & the shoe itself.  You can’t see the tongue or the ankle because of his bootcuts, and that these kicks protrude from under the pant-leg.  He prefers the way the shoes have been decorated, because they can reinforce his kick actions, for example a kick with the heel, which they can pose a deadly blow.


Weaponry of Choice:   Crazy has an arsenal that consists of an M1911, an M95A3, a katana, & a set of 6 kunai.

The M1911 is an American handgun that uses .45 ACP’s (automatic Colt pistol).  It is a well-known & highly respected handgun of early origins, yet may still be in service.  .45 ACP’s are wider than the other common handgun round, the 9X19 parabellum, making them deadlier.  Benny will use this weapon to target opponents a short distance away, as well as a finishing blow.  Since Benny supplies this weapon with SILVER-plated rounds instead of copper-plated ones, he will use it in conjunction with another weapon against some of the weaker kinds of vampires to force them vulnerable, and then deliver a fatal blow with this weapon specifically.  Benny likes this handgun for its stopping power, its good looks, and the high reputation this gun has.  In Benny’s case, he carries a copy of the Colt version:  the original, with a silver-colored frame and a wood-colored grip.


The MP5 family is a family of modern, German submachine guns that maintain the same appearance of being all black with almost the same receiver every time, which use the classic 9X19 mm Parabellum handgun round.  The MP5A3 is a member of this family which has a buttstock that can be pulled out.  This weapon is kept in Benny’s jacket so the enemy is surprised when he whips out a submachine gun.  He will use this weapon in situations where there are several opponents in a small area, which he will simply “mow” them down.  This is also a good weapon to have when navigating tight environments for its small size & light weight.  He may switch it to semi-auto, pull the stock out, or both for accuracy-based situations, in which he has a better grip on the weapon.  Benny likes to have light-weight weapons, partly because he’s not that physically strong, which he can deal with an assault rifle he finds on the ground or is handed, but he definitely likes submachine guns.  Another reason he prefers these small shooters is because they have a fast rate of fire; this makes them very difficult to escape unscathed.


Katana are old Japanese swords.  These are long with a single edge, they may weigh around the same as a traditional sword and lighter than 3-dementional ones.  There can always be a sword-fight every once in a while, so Benny is prepared for such an ordeal.  Katana are long for swords, which gives Benny the advantage of distancing himself from his opponent.  Being lighter weight, this kind of weapon compliments his agility-based build.  Benny had this weapon blessed so it now inflicts a greater damage on vampires that it doesn’t already do, being a long blade.  Katana are swords that everybody loves, leaving Benny as no exception, for its nice-working system and individuality.  Benny is one who loves the force of individuality, so he decorated the weapon himself from plain to fit his tastes.  He changed the hilt ribbon to a blue color and made a new cross-guard for it of wood that he varnished several times after its making.  He may use this weapon in conjunction with other ones or just punching & kicking, for example he may draw a kunai if it is possible to bring it close to his opponent while their attention is on the sword.

Kunai are Japanese throwing knives, preferred by ninjas.  Benny keeps these in his arm covers so that he has good access to them.  He can use them as a “personal-defense weapon” (PDW), as he has them close-to hidden and he can whip them out at moment’s notice.  If he is ever grabbed by someone that he knows comes from the opposition, he will draw one of these knives and attack frantically at the arms or other spots he can knick so the enemy will be inclined to let go to hold his wounds, letting Benny escape.  He may also throw one of these daggers as a quick attack if he is ever conflicted suddenly.
Race:   Human


Abilities:   Benny doesn’t have any special abilities in the sense of supernatural, like a sort of superpower.  He is a human, so he isn’t inclined to having such capabilities.  He does seem to come with some quick reflexes.  He makes due with his fighting & shooting skills.

He is a nice fighter with a katana, because he is light and so is the sword, giving him good control and quick reaction to something new that changes suddenly.

He is a decent shooter.  He adapts to the situation by switching weapons or the way he uses them, but still minding a bit of control on sights every once in a while.  Along with this, he may use some weapons in conjunction with another.  For example, he can wound a vampire with his submachine gun and render them vulnerable under pain, then finish them with a silver ACP.

He is pretty good at using hand-to-hand combat.  He has no specific style of martial-arts, but rather a combination of techniques based on his intentions, he does favor the blocking tactics of karate however.  One example is that he will attack quickly at every area on his opponent’s body that hurts in order to disarm them, another being that he will dodge & counter-attack very often.  He is a self-defence fighter, in which he prefers to remain as non-violent as he can.  He doesn’t really like rigid styles, as his body wasn’t exactly built like a stone wall and he almost feels they have “almost no finesse”.  This is why he looks down on common gangs like the “Bloods”, because they have no style, no control, therefore could be beaten by even Benny unless they were a baby about it & brought a weapon to a fist-fight, which he could probably take away (melee weapons are easy, especially something big like a bat.  Its guns that are the trick; you can’t do anything about those from a distance).

Benny is agile & light, making him alright at parkour.  He will resort to actions like vaulting over objects and somersaulting to break falls in order to escape the enemy or dodge ranged attacks.  He may run across narrow objects or jump off of them.


Organization:   Hellsing Organization


Personality:   There are three major sides to Benny:  a socialite (well, tries to mingle), kept-to-himself, “in-the-game”, & angered.

Benny likes to be in social deals, like celebrations or just plain conversation.  Benny will try to get himself involved in a conversation, because he hates the feeling of being lonely or ignored.  He loves to make some new friends to talk with.  When he is involved, he can be very loose without a lot of worry.  He can make up figurative language & phrases on a regular basis that includes mingling, so he may get someone to laugh in this way or tease in a banterly.(saying something that sounds bad, but isn’t meant for purpose of offence, like a light joke).  In fact, sometimes he might laugh at random times, like a “psychopath” (people think of psychos to laugh a lot, he may laugh after saying something or go a little psycho when fighting opposition on a mission, but only in the sense that he LOOKS crazy he may still hold some pity & doesn’t crave blood).  However, he is careful not to accidently hurt his friends’ feelings; he is a softy and feels terrible if he does.

If Benny is with himself, he sticks with himself.  It is an Autism trait that subjects will keep to themselves, which Benny is “high-functioning” (the signs of said disorder are faint and the subject seems a little closer to normal) and doesn’t switch to “me-time” very often since other Hellsing operatives are always around him & willing to speak with him.  Benny only ends up in this mode if he is by himself.  When he is, he tends to go to escape within pastimes, like drawing & listening to music.  It is easy to pull him out of the mode if someone talks to him or he notices their presence and will want to converse a bit.

If Benny is on a mission, he can be pretty focused.  He sounds a little like he has a higher rank than he is, speaking in a soft & calm tone.  He is secretly a little enthused about being on a mission, being young.  He tries not anything get to his head before he is deployed.  He just makes sure his guns are loaded, all weapons clean, & ready for action.  He will harbor some extra spirit for the task if he is helping someone out directly or fighting a force that he hates, like the Millennium for their racist mindsets & brutality to those they don’t like.

Benny gets frustrated easy and has a bit of a temper that he will give a shot at being calm, as weakness of his Autism, but this kind of anger isn’t like what happens when you get brutal.  He will be fuming if you attack him by emotional force.  Calling him things like “idiot” & “retard” doesn’t work on him anymore, because he knows well those are just signs of ignorance or attempts to hurt him, but he does get offended in the sense the offender insulted the rest of the Autistic population and will practically lecture them how they are wrong.  What really triggers his flames is threat to friends or those who seem helpless.  He does spare this kind of anger for the Millennium, again for their beliefs.  He however isn’t the kind that allows fury to override him, but one who will just hit harder.  He isn’t exactly calm either, but doesn’t completely lose control, therefore he may still fight well, just hit harder & wear an explicitly ticked off war face when he fights on missions.

Rank:   FNG


Biography:   Crazy was born in New York as & still is a human.  He was diagnosed with a disorder called Autism when he was six years old, given that he still couldn’t quite talk and had a hard time understanding the environment around him.  Being in New York, he could be seen as not human or dig his own grave with a gang, even the Mob, without knowing better.

His family moved out to California few years later, where a different part of his family moved to previously.  He ended up in an almost rural type of neighborhood, where he wasn’t under threat all the time.  It was a big change, which he wasn’t happy with (Autistics at a young age can be dubbed “neophobes”, because they don’t like things changed on them), but he got curious and would like to explore bit.  By this time, Benny has had some therapy with behavior & speech, so he was on his way to looking normal.  He could talk good sentences and just had a little trouble adapting to some things at school.

Benny used to be persecuted by complete strangers and some at school.  Other students just wondered what his deal was, his “special secret” as he calls it.  Human society tends to look down on minority, including those of a physical difference.  In the cases of deafness & ADHD however, sometimes it’s not ridicule, but sometimes pity.  He was mocked at a young age simply because he wasn’t like the rest, acted completely different, or had preferences far off from those of an average.  As he got older, with the help of therapy, experience, & the acceptance he was granted by few, he got better about the weaknesses Autistics exhibit early in their lives.  It’s almost as if he grew out of them and was like a normal child his age at for example 10 (no Autistic grows out of their Autism, but the negative traits like fearing physical contact & throwing tantrums can begin to fade.  Eventually they are left with the benefits and few negatives at a very faint extreme, this considers them to be “high-functioning”).  Now being 18, only signs you see at all are a slight frustration at failure, keeping to himself when alone or nothing of particular interest is happening, refusal to try things that look like slime or smell bad or feel weird chewing them, & attachments to a few things like his hat.

He had known about the supernatural and wasn’t quite sure whether to believe in ghosts or get skeptical.  One day his dilemma changed to a definite answer that paranormalities exist.  One day in the summer when he recently turned 18, at sun down, he got this bad feeling that felt gut-wrenching.  Sure as Hell, a man with a Swastika tatted to his face bursted through the window, with pale skin, canines (those stabbing teeth, “fangs”, canine is the true name) like a cat, & eyes with a deeper red than tomatoes his family uses in stuff for “Italian Night”.  It was a category D vampire.  He quickly reaped the lives of everyone in his family with a karambat; Benny has the details of the horrifying event burned into his memory.  The humanoid monster then looks Benny to the face, noticing him in the distance, and lets “Just vone more Italian!  You’re not fit su liff in sis vorld…  You vill soon join zem, tomaso bahg! (Just one more Italian!  You’re not fit to live in this world…  You will soon join them, tomato bug!)” utter from his mouth stained red from licking the blood off his blade  (Nazis believe that German is the master race and that all others are inferior.  This guy could be considered an extremist by taking Nazism to the next level) .  The assassin leapt toward the terrified teen, steel ready to “put-down” the poor kid.  Benny reacts by side-stepping the attack and pushes the mad man by his feet, since he was heading toward a wall and just slammed his face in it.  He tries to run to the gun safe in the house, hoping that he would get it open, but the vampire was in sight.  The attacker then tries to run Benny through with the knife, but gets the very tip stuck about an inch into the wall, Benny again jumped away from the man trying to kill him.  He tries to grab Benny, but misses him again, so then back-fists him.  The Nazi stands over Benny who spun and hit the floor on impact to curb stomp his head, but Benny rolls away.  Benny then spins (he is on one knee while the other is lashed out) and kicks his opponent in the shin, gets up and “cheap-shoots” him with the other foot, bunches the man in the gut and then slaps him in the face.  Benny then takes off to his room to try to think of a good weapon to use against his attacker like a yard stick or a drawing board (be careful with that art stuff, can be deadly!) while he pulls together and pulls his dagger out of the wall.  He hunts Benny down by the sounds of drawers opening & pencils rolling around.  As soon as the vampire enters the door, Benny opens up the ink he had in his hand and splashes it in the perpetrator’s face.  Blinded, the German lashes frantically with his karambat.  So Benny uses a pencil:  he times his retaliation by holding the opponents right arm out when it swings outward & opens the chest, Benny then aims for the heart with his #2HB pencil, successfully impaling the Nazi (by themselves, pencils can be a good weapon to substitute a knife stabbing.  Everybody knows they are made of wood, so this vampire is pretty much toast).  His panting slowed down as he watched the breathless villain fade to dust, and wept.

Poor Benny’s life had changed in a horrifying way:  he is now an orphan and he figured out the existence of supernature, the hard way, losing the rest of his innocence & naivety.  He had been suffering from post-traumatic stress, finding it hard to sleep for the next few weeks and looking over his shoulder all the time.  One day he decided that he will begin training his fighting abilities in many forms, considering he killed a vampire but with a weapon that doesn’t always prove a good one and that he will be ready for the next confrontation with something you let’s-just-say don’t exactly see every day (any other supernatural entities that may come his way, exactly as the text implies that it is far from ordinary or the usual).  

Benny never actually had FORMAL firearms training, but that didn’t mean he didn’t have any at all.  Every so often, he would visit his grandfather in the country end of town who was an independent one (could take of himself, old but tough) & a gun-type hunter (used guns instead of traps or anything with an arrow).  This guy would shoot every once in a while, which Benny had curiosities come about.  Being a teenager, he wouldn’t fit in well with the rest of the California-crowd who probably own a gun at his age.  So grandpa changed that.  He showed him how to handle weapons as well as fire them & maintain.  His grandfather new Benny well enough that he would get curious on who the gun worked, like why you pull the bolt back when you load a fresh mag (weapon already being clear, starting with no round chambered).  His marine friend also new about weapons and would answer any question Benny had, training & informing him further.  So the three would every once-in-a-while head out to the grandfather’s ranch and go shooting.  Benny even began researching guns so if he was ever pitted against one, he would know how it worked, how powerful it really is (a gun is a gun, but everybody knows some are worse and would reduce survival rate.  For a cheap-shot example, nobody really survives an AK-47 but can probably take “one” from a Beretta M9.), and how to use one if he didn’t have a choice.  Now he knows things like why the AK-47 sucks in one way but is good in another (inaccurate with a deadly round, making it a good short range weapon, as in further than 10-15 ft. but shorter than 50), that the Thompson is really a submachine gun (submachine guns are most-of-the-time defined as using a pistol round and having a rate of fire like a regular machine gun), or what round an M-249 SAW (SAW=“squad-automatic weapon”-light machine gun, sorry gore fans!) uses.  He was eventually gifted with an M1911from his grandfather, for his skill, know-how of handling & maintaining weapons, and safety with firearms (things like “treat every weapon as if it is loaded” & “know your target & its background”).

He did however take a karate class once.  He used to practice every once in a while to make sure his skills didn’t grow dull.  As immature & impractical as it sounds, he also got tips online from book-like sources & video clips on technique & the such on other moves, but he was very particular& careful to look for legitimate sources.  He does use the techniques he learned in training of using an opponent’s force against them.  Even though he doesn’t like them,  learns of bare-handed styles of combat anyways mostly so he may know how to fight them better, as no style is perfect and he can exploit the way his opponent works.  

On one of Benny’s travels, he & the “guys” of his family ended up at a “steel shop” (swords, knives, statues, whatever steel-craft is envious and you “don’t see everyday”, nothing really specific).  This was recently, before the attack.  Benny was ecstatic to be in such a place; how often to you get to see a sword?  Benny likes to grab something from everywhere he goes that would be extremely rare to visit again anytime soon, so he got a katana.  They weren’t exactly fond of the idea, but he persuaded them of putting in a protective case and swearing not to pull it out (they didn’t really trust his envy of ninjas & the such, Autism may cause one to not grasp reality completely, but he was pretty careful around dangerous objects).
He makes his own kunai.  They’re a little bit crude but they work.  He uses his welding skills that he picked up from an agricultural club he was under since he was pre-teen, in the mechanics department.  He welds pieces of thick metal together and attaches the unfinished blade (you can’t define it as “finished”, he hasn’t performed the last step on the blade. to a rod about a centimeter thick (there is a hole at the back of the blade to let this rod slip through).  This rod goes half-way into the blade, which one side has to short pieces of rod going up & down.  He welds a little more on the top & bottom of the blade to attach it to these frame pieces, ensuring that the blade will never collapse.  He cuts thick piping to make a ring-pommel and welds it to the free end of the rod.  He grinds the edges of the ring to a rounded ring, and the edges of the blade sharp.  He then uses emory cloth to polish off his near-complete weapon, then wraps a blue ribbon around the hilt, and declares it finished.

But his knowledge & training came from his time in America.  He couldn’t really make his flight back home, so he was stuck in Britain for a while.  The next morning, a man offered to adopt him as a foster parent, seeing that he was roaming the streets with no one accompanying him and to no concrete goal.  This man he accepted as a father figure was secretly a Hellsing operative who thought Benny had potential, witnessing the incident last night in secret.  Benny continued to train himself whenever he could to prepare for another incident like what took his family, which his training was also being spied on.
One day, he saw a mysterious man walk by his mail box, extremely close to it.  Benny tried to catch him, but he seemed to have disappeared around a corner.  Benny checked his mailbox and noticed an envelope that said “confidential” on it with no return address, but is name as the recipient.  He opened it up in his house, which he locked all the doors & closed all the blinds on closed & locked windows, so that any secrets don’t get out.  It was his invitation into the Hellsing Organization.  After reading it with wide open eyes of surprise & shock, he saw the check boxes on the bottom.  He marked his acceptance to the invitation with a firm face of determination and left it in his mailbox with the flag up as instructed.

When he got to the Hellsing Mansion, it was a big shock to him.  It was a massive building that when he walked in, he knew there was lots to know & so much to see.  He had seen many other operatives & militia of all kinds, human & vampires alike.  He was a little nervous seeing Integra Hellsing for the first time, but got it together and let her know he was determined.  The things he heard of her, he liked her style, which gave him a sense a security.  She knew he would need a little work, but that’s what training is for and they had just the stuff.

After he was accepted, he made himself some arm guards.  He used welding to make a basic rectangle, big enough to slip his arm & sleeves through it but be a bit from snug.  He put some cushioning underneath the armor, but leaving a compartment for his kunai.  He strategically decided to build these because he knew that he could use his arms very much in defense against a melee-opponent.  He used gloves that he had purchased before this time and incorporated them into his outfit.

A few days later, he visited America for a few to retrieve the weapons he would have in his arsenal.  He told his grandfather that his place of belonging was in Britain.  The kind of grandfather he was, he was accepting about Benny’s decision about where he believes his place is, as well as the fact that he had no parents to tell him “no” and that he was 18 years old anyways.  These talks, goodbyes, & reunion predictions happened on the last day of his visit.  He was all set with America and truly began a new life in Britain.

Nowadays he is one who will be social with his comrades as long as nobody is on a mission.  He is one to bring a light mood, understanding & open as well.  He really is a joker who will get poetic with almost anything around him that is noticeable or interesting.  He really is serious about controlling various supernatural threats, in the sense that it isn’t much of an option to him, he wouldn’t have a firm tone and he would only appear as if he is eager to fight such threats. He wants to do this type of thing because he wants to protect the innocent from what happened to him.  He is an equalist, in which discrimination against an ethnicity or other distinguishing & unchangeable traits, like his Autism.  To him, discrimination is unacceptable, and will fight for victims.  This is the reason he hates the Millennium specifically.  He is also one to take one for the team; he will defend his allies to the death.


RP Sample:   It’s just another day at the firing range for Operative Crazy, visiting as if he was just another weapon-enthused guy looking to fire a gun.  He is honing his skill on & testing a Beretta M9.  Operative Johnson walks through the squeaky door, made squeaky so those shooting know they’re not being snuck up on.  Johnson pauses for a minute, knowing his friend, Crazy, that guy has probably been at the firing line for a while.  Turns out ...PAH……PAH…, Crazy is striking brass through a peashooter.  Crazy stops shooting for a moment, flips the safety on and turns around.

“Safe!  Oh, hey Johnson!”

“Hey Crazy!  I was lookin’ for ya.  I wanted to check up on you ‘cuz you seem to be a pretty curious little guy.  I knew I would find you at a local firing range, somehow.”

Crazy explains, “Oh did you?  Well, one of the operatives picked off one of these Beretta (rattling his tongue at the ‘r’, he says ‘that’s how you’re supposed to say it’, being an Italian word) M9’s and wanted to check with me to see if it was safe.  Course, you would think it was if someone was using it in the first place, then again, you can never be too careful.”

“You seem to know a lot about this stuff.  I mean, for somebody to come to you first when they just got a new weapon & it wasn’t at a gun store.”

Crazy says, “Yeeaah, I feel like I know a little too much for a guy like me, don’tcha think?”

Johnson responds, “Oh no, not at all, well…”

Crazy replies, almost laughing, “That’s ‘cuz it benefits somebody else!  Well, in that case, it makes me a little bit alright with it.  I mean, if some ability of yours helps somebody, might as well use it.” as he’s flipping the safety off.  “… (to himself) Finish this grouping… (to Johnson)  Going hot.”  He then fires three more rounds PAH…PAH…PAH!  The weapon’s slide then flies back as the last shot is fired.

He whispers to himself, “Well that seems to be in order!” then switches the empty magazine for a full one and clicks the slide forward again.

He says to Johnson, “Why not talk while I check the target?”

Johnson tells Crazy, “So I was thinking you might wanna leave your headpiece on or program my number into your cell phone.  I mean, what if we needed you at moment’s notice or something, and we didn’t have any idea where you were or couldn’t get a hold of you?”

Crazy says to him as he gets to his perforated target, “Yeah, I see what you’re sayin’.  (to himself)  Dang, not that good a grouping! (to Johnson)  Yeah, I don’t wanna disappoint anybody here!  Just because of my own curiosities & wanderings, I don’t need anybody else to pay a price for- LOOK OUT!!!”  Crazy was turning back to Johnson and realizes there is a large weapon sitting straight up-&-down on top of the long desk with a body behind it at the firing line.  They have an attacker.

Crazy leans quickly to his right while going for the ground and pushes Johnson down.  The attacker emits a large “POOOM” from a sniper rifle and barely misses as that bullet punches a big hole into the wall.  Crazy quickly pushes himself back up and fires two suppressive rounds at the perpetrator, one appearing to have struck the weapon.  “C’mon, Johnson! (reaching for his hand) Let’s say you & I take this s_head out!”

“Right!” They both run towards there hidden opponent.

“Spread out!” shouts Crazy to Johnson, knowing that it’s two against one, only the one has huge bullets!  They approach the attacker at only twenty more feet away.  He then rises up from his hiding place and chucks two throwing knives, one for each would-be target.  Luckly they both dodge the oncoming blades and attempt to fire back at the attacker with their handguns, but he has already hidden himself once again.  They slowly walk up to the desk and Crazy signs off to Johnson, telling him to stay there and that they will grab him when he rises back up from the desk.  They do just that.  Their attack rises back up with a handgun held in a firing position straight out in front of him to the far left, expecting them to have walked around the desk to catch him.  They were smart enough to take caution of that, and so Crazy grabs his opponents firing hand and pulls it toward himself.  While shifting underneath his opponents arm, Crazy hooks him in the face & flips the safety on with the same hand he used to grab the attacker’s armed hand.

“Johnson, hop the desk & grab him!” he tells Johnson as he hammers the attacker’s wrist with his armed hand and pulls the gun out, throwing down range.   The attacker his finally able to grab Crazy by his jacket and pulls him in on an attempt to butt his head at Crazy’s.  Crazy reacts by putting his head down so that his opponent hammers the top of it with his forehead, where a fedora is sitting.

“Ow!  Jeez, you’re an aggressive one!” Crazy shouted as he was rubbing his head.  He then jabs his opponent’s gut and spin-kicks his face, with his leg flying over the desk.  Johnson tries to grab, but gets elbowed in the face in the process.  So Crazy grabs the perp by the collar and slaps him with an ear-piercing “tch!!!” , then pulls his face to the desk.  Johnson finally is able to grab the perp’s hands and cuff him.
“Hellsing Organization, you’re under arrest.  Hey Crazy, who do you think this guy’s with?  Iscariot?  Millennium?  A Wild Goose?”  Johnson forces.  They hand-shake and take the wannabe assailant into custody.

Crazy responds “I dunno!  Oh well, either way, sucks for him!  (to himself) Well that proves this thing’s reliability in battle!  Man, my hat!”

Well it is better than what you've shown us before. I'm not entirely sure about the gun but to me everything looks alright.

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Why does Hellsing care that you killed a vampire in America? That's not their jurisdiction.

My head is spinning from just the volume of things in that biography.

Your RP sample is written in present tense.

didnt you say that it was supposed to be in present tense? anyways, would it be possible for a hellsing operative to get an assignment in america or is A LOT of the stuff they do strictly stuck in britain?

I said that was something you had to change, then gave an example of past tense. It's not impossible, but there has to be a good reason as to why England cares what goes on in America, especially when we already established a while back that they have their own supernatural hunting organization.

i see. so im thinking that the family took a trip to england and THATS where they were killed. either it was a regular vampire who was straight-up insane or millenium vampire who was getting covert along with his comrades, and had a craving for some violence and went through a random doorstep to get it. would any of those be good? (i know the insane neutral vampire choice sounds more legit. how is a millenium vampire gonna get into brittain & not get shot at on his way in, lead alone touched-down on english soil?!)

He wouldn't be going back to America after.

ok so i guess i have a plan if these are the cases. even though you get a round-trip ticket and you can just show that guy at the desk & he'll let you in for the second trip that takes you back to wherever you came from, like you guys said these hellsing guys would care less, seeing that he would be heading back to america. it's not like a few of the operatives would go all the way to america to check this guy out, even though they would think that he could definitely be a new operative.

Are you done?

ok, i understand that ridl (if not anybody else, which is perfectly understandable too) keeps a time limit on if you fix a character sheet or not. sorry, if anything happens on this fixed post, i wont be able to get to it, ill be at camp.

We just ask after a few weeks of nothing to make sure the person is still there. Lots of people leave when they get asked to change something because they can't handle criticism.

ok cool! n i can imagine =/ anyways im back in action

i had this fixed some time back, so i'm awaiting critique. got awful quiet.

Well you get an A for effort. You still never got around to changing the name and your description of this character is not really something I imagine working well in Hellsing. Since you did at least put an effort, I will give a yes to it but you've got a ways to go. Also, just fyi, capitalization and punctuation are big issues for me when i see postings so please work on that.

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Don't take this the wrong way, but I'm just tired of looking at this. I'll approve you, but I'll be monitoring you for at least a few weeks.

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