Jaime Sheffield [Re-applying]

Name: Jaime Sheffield

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Physical appearance: Standing at around 6 foot 10 inches then Jaime is extremely thick built. His body is quite muscular yet at the same time the muscles aren’t very well defined. His face has a sharp angular quality to it, though he does have a rather pronounced jaw line. Jaime has black hair and fairly tanned skin, though he has grown up in England notoriously cold, he has done his fair share of work. Years in the rolling mills has taught him what. Now though he has synthetic skin which means he can’t tan anyway. His left arm due to the amount of surgery in it looks slightly strange. Looking almost like he’s had a lot of sub dermal implants. This gives it the look of being lumpy

Clothing of choice: usually wearing a white shirt and tie and black trousers, he normally disdains a jacket. Though he can be normally seen wearing a waistcoat and normally has highly polished black shoes on. He spends hours on making sure that he always looks presentable as he was brought up to make sure that he always looked his best. His tie is always black and his waistcoat is black though on a silver ring on his right hand he has the Sheffield coat of arms engraved. His belt has a silver plain buckle, while he also has holsters for his weapons on both of his hips. He doesn’t dress for battle but feels more comfortable dressed like this than in anything else.

Weaponry of choice: On his belt he has a sawn off shotgun that fires 24 gauge silver slugs. While on the other sides he has a 9mm sub machine gun that also fires silver blessed rounds. He usually has about twelve slugs and three magazines on his person in a special part of his holster, he has pockets built in underneath, in his right arm he has what would be the bone, hollowed out with a pure silver, steel plated and blessed spike. This allows him to use it as a piercing weapon to stab through vampires with; it works just as well on humans as well.

Race: Cyborg

Abilities: Strength, speed, and durability of a Category F vampire, the only bit of his body there’s a significant amount of cybernetics is the upper left part of his body. Because of his injuries the only way for him to survive is implants and other small bits of technology for him to be able to have the cybernetics support and in the case of his left lung has had to be transplanted; and had a small metal cage integrated around it to protect it from further damage. His left sets of ribs are supported with a steel frame placed around it to make that side of his rib cage stronger. His left arm was wrecked and so it had to have a cybernetic wrapping along the bone that holds it all together and reinforces it.


He eats and drinks like a normal human and due to the basic nature of his implants then they require minimum maintenance from a medical specialist that works in Hellsing. This comes down to making sure his vitals are ok and if they aren’t then that means that something’s wrong and a technician takes over from there.

All of the implants and cybernetics leave his left side vulnerable if attacks pierce his skin, and any serious damage can completely disable him. But due to reinforcing his bone structures it’s hard for that to happen and leaves him fairly safe from anything bad happening on that side. Though not heavily armoured he can take a bullet on his left side from about 20 yards from an AK-47 and it won’t penetrate deep enough to get to a cybernetic component if it breaks the armouring, armour piercing rounds though are a death sentence to him.

His training to be part of the Royal Marines has put him in peak condition, he has extremely ggod shooting and skills at firing weapons. He also is extremely good at Judo getting to a high standard before and during his time at Lympstone.

Organization: V.W.A.T

Personality: Retaining most of his personality from before he became a cyborg then he’s quite a social person. He doesn’t enjoy being alone and is used to being around others and socialising. While being aware and knowledgeable of his privileged position in life he’s quite down to earth. His father had all of the boys spent weeks when they reached the age of 16 in the steel rolling mills. There they learnt what it was like for normal people, it was also there that they came to truly realised what the town was. After that Jaime always kept the rough speaking and some of the slang talks of the steel workers of Sheffield. His humours crude and he finds even the most derogatory jokes amusing. He fits in with the most rowdy of groups and enjoys going out to bars. He finds club music annoying; he finds bars much more to his liking. He also finds picking up girls is easier, in a quiet place they are more at ease and it’s gotten him a reputation as a carefree slightly eccentric womaniser. It’s in his blood and veins, this makes him extremely rash and hot headed when it comes to people insulting his home town. He’s also extremely devoted, being more than willing to sacrifice honour and all respect if it meant defending this place he regards as the one place he belongs. He hates vampires, which are the one thing that he despises more than anything. Things have made him bitter when it comes to the supernatural. He’s indifferent to battle, only caring about destroying his opponent. It seems that he doesn’t care what happens to himself; only wanting to deal death to the things that killed his brother.

Rank: Sergeant

Biography: Born as the second son to the Baron of Sheffield Jaime, which since power was given to the people a pretty empty title, but still kept respect and had a decent amount of money to its name. Spent most of his time being raised for greatness in Government, this was tempered though with him being taught about the people of the town. It was explained to them from an extremely early age that not everyone was as privileged as him. Even if he couldn’t do anything he should always remember those less fortunate, as a noble and a guardian it was his place to put his people before his own life and those of his family and friends. His older brother being destined to inherit the titles then it was going to be Jaime’s place to join the army. It was tradition and in general would be good of the family name. Learning from the age of five the basics of combat through Judo classes and other martial arts then there wasn’t anything else that anyone considered for him. It was his fate and his destiny, set in stone.

At the age of sixteen like all men of his family he spent his summer working in the steel rolling mills; it was there that he picked up his speaking habits. From then on it never quite left him. It was considered that as a “sheffielder” then he should speak like one. It was how their family was viewed, they were no better than anyone else and knew a good days work. It helped to avoid tension and animosity between them and the people of the city.

But when he came of age then things changed, while out drinking after finishing training for Royal Marine Commando's. A vampire that had been going around the city butchered the place, killing all his friends and leaving him inches from death, his little brother who’d come with him included. He was left broken and dying. When Hellsing agents came onto the scene they quickly killed it, though there was only one way to save the wounded Jaime. And that was an experimental project that was developed since it was discovered that the Major was a Cyborg, and that was to make more. Stronger and far more effective than normal soldiers, and specialised for fighting vampires. It wouldn’t normally have been done, but the fact of the matter was that the boy knew about vampires and even though he was dying still wanted to fight them.

He didn’t want to simply die without taking revenge for what’d, normally it wouldn’t have been done but the fact was that his father was cousin to Sir Hugh Irons, and Sir Hugh knew people in America. He inquired with people he knew in the white house about what could be done and in the end they decided that there was one thing that could be done. He would get give to someone who was heading a home defence organisation whom they called Director Steeler. It was a secretive process and eventually on the condition that the official story was that Jaime died in hospital the Americans decided that they would save him. But after that he would belong to them.

RP sample: Sitting down in front of his employer then Jaime felt nothing, it was something that he’d done hundreds of times before and now getting ordered to and getting orders did nothing to him. It only made his life a little less empty, with these missions he went out and completed, he was given a purpose. This was just another day at the office. “Director Steeler, what’re details?” his voice had a metallic property to it and still it retained some of the bad pronunciation and the missing out of words for which his people were famous. It was one of the things that he was noted for. His accent was one of the things that he was famed for, he found it weird. But still people talked and he wasn’t one to get caught up in it all, he was fine only being on the surface of the social side of things.
His boss took a second and lit a cigar, “We’re having a problem in a few flats in downtown DC vampires have taken over a fairly small area, and we need it purged.”

Taking a second to crunch numbers and start to finally come up with a plan of action. “I’ll go and sort it out then” he sighed, “It was meant to be my weekend off but still. Work comes before anything right”
“Go and sort it out now, now”

Standing up the cyborg walked slowly out of the room not glancing back at his boss, there was no point, words weren’t needed. He knew what was going to happen, he was going to butcher everything he found, that didn’t need to be said. Walking out he found two guards standing at the door, nodding at them Jaime made his way down to one of the V.W.A.T mustang cars. Getting into one of the smaller cars that he didn’t know about, not paying too much attention to what it was he didn’t like cars. Still speed was necessary at a time like this. Turning it on he made sure that the garage door was open before driving out and going to the scene of the vampire insurgents.

Stepping through the doorway into the flats Jaime slowly made his way up towards his target. It was in the top part of the flat and it was home to about five of them. One step at a time he was at the top in around a minute. It was totally silent, yet there was the smell of blood in the air. Going up to a blood splattered door he kicked it open, all hell broke loose. A vampire ran towards him, with a quick burst of holy water he was blinded. Running into the flat His blade licked out and pierced the vampire’s heart with a quick stab. “DIE YOU UNHOLY BASTARDS!”

Another one charged, his fist hit Jaime in the chest and knocked him back, yet doing no perceivable damage his opponent tried again and again. Punch for punch he tried to batter the android backwards, “It’s not working, ha” his armoured fist slashed out and caught his opponent in the side of the head. The second one turned to dust, the others were more wary now. The last three came in all at once.
“Checkmate”
His right hand pulled out his shotgun and firing it twice he emptied all of the silver shrapnel into his opponents blowing them back like straw.

Putting his shotgun away and pulling out his sub machine gun he killed them all with quick bursts of shots. Pulling out his phone the Cyborg phoned up his HQ “The job’s done,” walking out he closed the door behind him.

I said it before and I'll say it again. There is NOTHING in the manga or the OVA to suggest that Hellsing or their supporters have the technological knowledge to create a Cyborg.

APPROVALS: 00

DISAPPROVALS: 01

Agreeing. When we talked about this before, you had some fine plans, from what I understand, to join V.W.A.T. (since America would believably have cybernetic technology). I don't know why you resubmitted it in practically the exact same form as it was disapproved in.

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Disapprovals: 2

Also, this is John. Forgot to switch.

posted wrong copy originally like an idiot -_-, changed it from Hellsing to V.W.A.T.

Voting reset, since this is a new sheet. I am seeing some improvement in this copy.

You mentioned Hellsing in your abilities. Change that, since it was probably a typo from the old version.

You say his left side is most armored, but his spike thing is on the right. Was that just another typo or am I not understanding? Not sure how I feel about that level of bullet-resistance, either.

Always a pleasure to see a non-silent badass.

But now we've taken a nose dive, similar to the witch burning scene and beyond from the Silent Hill movie. No being related to Sir Irons; he's old as dirt, and canon relations make me want to puke. There's no good reason as to why Hellsing would hand him over to V.W.A.T., whom they have only a passing acquaintance with.

Steeler doesn't smoke, but other than that, I don't much care about his appearance in your biography.

I am seeing improvement, so I'll hold off on disapproving this. Fix this biography and it should be fine.

I guess that works.

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Disapprovals: 0

Couple things, I assume that he was in America on this holiday when the vampire attacked but I'm still not buying how he survived. You claim he was inches from death and yet he was stable enough for them to go through the process of figuring out who his dad was, the dad getting a hold of the freaking White House, getting clearance for the surgery, and THEN going through with the procedure? That's a large time gap bud. It's not necessarily impossible but it's vague and I don't like vague. Clear up the order of events a bit and it'll be an approval from me.

Edits made Anderson!

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Standing at around 6 foot then Jaime is extremely thick built.

Unless he is just six foot, I get a feeling that your then is suppose to say ten, which to me makes sense for the rest of his physical description.

Personality: I almost confused it with part of the bio of the oc. I like where the personality is going but you should make it a bit thicker and rich. We know he is social and likes to be social... but how? Does he go to the bar? Does he like to cook some mean ribs for a bbq for his fellow employees? He worked in a factory so what kind of humor does he have besides being a loyal person? What does he enjoy doing in his spare time? Is his room organized? Disorganized? What does he look for in friends? Was he once a womanizer? Ask yourself questions that your friends would as you, or, take your friends personalities and fuse them a little bit to make this personality shine.

Bio and the rp samples are good.

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Disapprovals: 0

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