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| Subject: Zanoko Sakuito's application Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:57 pm | |
| Name: Sakuito, Zanoko (last, first) Alias:El martillo de diablo Age: 150 (looks like 20) Gender: Male Physical appearance: Standing at a five foot eleven Zanoko doesn't stand out among much of the other people. His eyes are a jet black unless he finds himself in a battle. At that time they turn crimson. Zanoko's hair is completely black.Weighing at a mere 170lbs Zanoko is easily maneuverable. He sports an athletic build. If he takes his shirt off his abs are visible, and a scar that spans from his right shoulder across his back to his left waist. He also has a cross shaped scar below his left eye. For the most part this is what he looks like. Though the clothing is down below. Also, he has on occasion worn this attire. - Spoiler:
Clothing of choice: Zanoko likes to wear a long black trench coat, Black kakki pants, and a black dress shirt. He sometimes wears a black fedora. Weaponry of choice: Zanoko likes to use 4 regular Katanas and a nine mill pistol with blessed bullets. Katanas: El Godess blanco (The white Goddess) looks: - Spoiler:
This is carried on his right side. El diablo negro (The black Devil) looks: - Spoiler:
This sword is on his left side. Los asesinos gemelos de hombre (The twin man slayers) looks: - Spoiler:
This blade is one of two, both identicle. And as an added afect they can be combined to form a duel bladed sword hilt on hilt.These are put on his back. Race: Vampire Abilities: Rank c Organization: Unaffiliated Merc Personality: When it comes to personality any way to describe Zanoko is not enough. At first glance Zanoko could be considered odd or psychotic, However in reality he is much much more. For example, Zanoko loves a good fight. He is always looking out for himself unless he is on a mission. However if someone offers to pay a higher price there is a possibility he will sell out unless there was an agreement before hand. If he is challenged to fight when his job states not to which is what he loves a lot. Rank: C Biography: - Spoiler:
Beginning Arc: He was born first, Zanoko was the one born before Kitaro by a lot actually. 5 years which at the time was a ton for the both of them. However the parents were abusive to them both. Each finding there own way to escape it. Kitaro escaping with women and with friendship and others and Zanoko escaping to an inner sanctuary almost Buddhist like mental state to avoid the people around them. They grew up in a shit hole literally. They lived in a small project that was run down and battered and beat down on the side of a large town that was a suburb of a larger town. It was the ghetto. The ghetto brings fear to most people but to the boys known as Zanoko and as Kitaro the two of them called the ghetto home. They tried to be outside as much as possible. As a small child Kitaro was burned with a waffle iron while Zanoko was held down by their mother and had ciggerete butts being put out in his face. It was a terrible experience so the two of them got used to dealing with rough types of people and standing up to every situation they could possibly stand up in and backing down when it was necessary.
Leaving to Another Life: Finally the father of the two boys killed the mother by strangling her with his belt. Seeing this they were going to run and Kitaro would have escaped but Zanoko was caught his dad grabbed him and was about to execute him by way of head removal when Kitaro slammed into the father and grabbed his knife and they took off into the night. Soon after that Zanoko and Kitaro ran into a kinky female vampire who was wearing quite the sexy outfit. They didn't know she was a vampire and somehow playing outside all day in a lonely ghetto with abusive parents and a murderer dad didn't get either of them laid. The vampress wanted slaves and so she easily seduced Kitaro's nature of attraction to women. Soon after when she took him away to supposedly have sex with Kitaro she grabbed him by the neck and drained all of his blood and transformed him into what she thought was a ghoul. However he was not a ghould and he became her vampire assistant. Determined to win at least one slave from this she forcefully drank the blood of Zanoko and he to turned into a vampire. Eventually after being sore about this she trained them in the arts of vampire combat and such. During a mission of hers for she was a mercenary she was felled and her final words were for Kitaro and Zanoko to free themselves by drinking her blood. They did and they became free.
Formation of the ZanTaro Organization: By order of birth the name came. When she died the only two people who were in this mercenary company were the two recently freed class C vampires. They assumed they would be able to handle the missions that a B Category Vampire would being two of them and their master being one rank higher than them in power. So the two formed the group and ever since have been getting information and such from other sources and tracking down and working as mercenaries. Whoever paid the most won their trust and won their loyalty and won their service. The loser gets whatever the winner wants out of the deal.
RP sample:- Spoiler:
{{post 1}} The chimes of bells rang out over the forest as a small door appeared. As the door opened a bright white light appeared inside. The sky went dark, the light grew brighter, and a small red light could be seen getting closer to the entrance. The light got brighter and brighter as A Silhouette became visible. A hard thud sound was hear as the figure's right foot hit the ground. When the left foot came it snapped a twig as it too made a thud. The gate was closing, the sky returning to normal, and A hell butterfly escaped just in time. It was a gloomy night as The man started to walk around, The sounds of crunching leaves and twigs signifying its steps that are otherwise not noticeable. The figure had an all black ninja outfit that bore metal boots, metal Gauntlets that had small spikes, it also bore metal knee guards. The figure had a white Haori on his right shoulder strapped so the insignia is still viable. The figure had a cigarette in its mouth which it casually flicked in a fancy way every time the cherry got to long. This figure stepped in to a small light cast by the moon and reveled the features of its face that signified it was a man. He bore two Scythes on his back, both a foot in length on his back, facing opposite ways. The forest was somewhat silent with the exception of some chirps, hoots and a twig or two breaking. The leaves were green, still in mid summer, and the small pond was a light baby blue. The captain started to ramble in his thinking. 'Heh, so I'm supposed to meet someone here. This better be good because I don't wanna miss my tea. i should have got someone to bring me tea here.' The butterfly settled on a branch nearby to aoid anyone noticing it or the captain.
{{Post 2}} The man turned around and faced Delz. The hood covering his face the man could not ascertain this Delz's expression. This didn't bother the man in the slightest but the comment from this, Delz, did. He had said he was going to kill this man, this Captain of the second Division. This was rare as he had never had to actually kill someone for a random reason like this. It was THE most random reason ever, or so the man perceived. 'It's as if this 'Delz' guy has now idea who I am. Or even what I'm capable of.' His thoughts were interrupted by his own mouth that spoke before his mind told it to.
"Ah, so I assume tea is out of the question then, ah yes I suppose it is. Ah well, then I guess I have little choice."
This man knew how to fight and loved it, yet he had one flaw with it. He wanted to avoid it, if possible. The man is like a demon in the respect that once he gets warmed up he goes all out and doesn't stop. This would prove to be his downfall one day but he wouldn't let this day be then. The man retorted before Delz could respond.
"Solace, Yakura. And I have no information on you Mr. Delz. This will be interesting indeed. And as you wish I will fight."
Yakura slowly took off his Haori and set it on a branch several feet away. After which he started walking towards this 'Delz', still smoking his cigarette. There was little on Yakura's mind other than what he was going to do. 'I don't really wanna fight so i guess I'll drag this out and see what this boy has got to offer.' Just a split second after Yakura finished this thought his image dissipated in a silent show of movements the naked eye could not see. His image reappeared so close to Delz that Yakura could breathe down his neck. Yakura aimed a kick at Delz' Stomach while simultaneously charging reaitsu in that leg for an added affect. If this missed Yakura had positioned himself in such a way that he would be able to flip from an attack to his chest and up. As Yakura moved in to attack the trees, birds, all animals alike fell silent as if watching their fight. This fact was something Yakura took notie to as he started to focus on this Delz character.
{{Post 3}} The collision from their two legs caused an uproar of reaitsu filed air to burst from the contact. It was as if two giants, no two megalithic beings set on a cause for self preservation. Rather one being set on this quest with the other still in the passive stage of the battle. Yaura now noticed the crimson, demon like eyes the being Delz bore as he leaped back to gather a little distance. He listened intently to Delz as he explained what he knew and how he felt about the battle.
"Ah, well I see we both have two different standings on the ma-"
His sentence was cut off by Delz creating a small crater, kicking, and releasing so much reaitsu that it caused rocks, soil, and other miscellaneous parts fly towards him. Yakura stood his ground and awaited the debris to come close. As the debris reached the four meter mark Yakura started to swing, bend, and flip his way out of most of the projectiles. This however caused great distress on his mood for fighting. The more he dodged, attacked, and set his sites upon the objective he started to become more and more like a demon himself. Though this was still a safe distance away he still wondered how long it would take him to become consumed in the fight to the point he was unable to back out. 'There is still time to try and convince him not to fight, though y the looks of things it won't be easy.' His mind's voice was cut short by a rock just a centimeter from his face whizzed by. With most of the random objects gone Yakura started to slow his movements to regular speed which caused a fist size rock to slam in to his left shoulder. However painful this was he did not find it enough to not ignore. Yakura stood silent and frozen for a moment as he thought of what to do next. 'Well, I could attack or use a kido. Or I could just leave. tea!! I could get tea, eh I could use a cup. well back to the fight anyway.' He put the remainder of his cigarette out as it burned to the filter. There was still little he COULD or WOULD do. He reached in to his robe with his right hand, pulled out a small box, and took out a new cigarette. After he placed it in his mouth he lit it with a small lighter he had also in the box. Taking several seconds to enjoy the feel of the smoke as it caressed his internal organs, he placed it back in his robe. The man was now viable in the dark night by the fag in his mouth. He walked towards Delz once again in a slow and leisurely way. This took all of two seconds before his image yet again dissipated in a show of silence and eye obstructing speed. Yet this time his moments were visible by the item he carried in his mouth. A small streak of red light flew towards him as nothing else moved. Yakura's image reappeared several inches away to Delz' left. Yakura then aimed a kick to Delz' stomach with a reaitsu charged left leg, While placing his hands in his pockets.
"I don't wish to fight Mr. Delz. If we could come to an agree-"
His mouth stopped as he realized there was no room for questions. 'This is a wast of my time, i might as well start fighting for real. But then again, I just might have to lead this man to-" His thoughts faded away as he kept an eyen on the attak for any retaliation.
This was a major fight thread I was in
Last edited by Zanoko on Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:26 pm; edited 3 times in total |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:47 pm | |
| You did a great job here, and I can't wait to see him in action.
Approvals: 1
Disapprovals: 0 |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:12 am | |
| Seems alright
Approvals: 2 Disapprovals: 0 |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:51 am | |
| You didn´t answer the first question.
Name: Alright, although it would`ve been appropriate to write it in western terms. A spanish alias for a japanese guy?
Age: Again, quite old for a Category C.
Gender: Men like you stand proudly, even at the dawn of the apocalypse....
Physical appearance: Its short, but alright. He hasn´t got a face... as ususal.
Clothing of choice: VERY short.
Weaponry of choice: Alright, right ahead, unless they have different abilities, bringing four Katanas at once into battle has no sense or purpose whatsoever.
Also, aside from that, you didn´t say anything about them being silver or blessed.
Aside from both this, the gun he uses wasn´t discribed at all, neither in a picture, nor in text format. Capacity? Single or Double Action? What model? FMJ, Hollow point, AP bullets?
Race: Like I said, old, but okay I guess.
Abilities: Probaby the shortest discription of abilities i`ve ever seen on this site.
Organization: Alright
Personality: Short, but nice, and its okay for me.
Rank: NO. The millitary rank goes here, not the race.
Biography: Quite a lot like Kitaro´s one, but of the same quality and original on its own, as since it circles around another character. A one of a kind example and thus approved.
RP sample: Suits the standards and is approved.
Other/Final score:
Well... not as good as Kitaros one, but still pretty good. The weaponary is a big issue, and many little mistakes ran into the sheet along the way. Also, its much, much shorter than Kitaro´s novel sized registry, not as detailed and not as original either. Its still an approval, but with flaws inside and serious point deductions. After asking you said you saw four of the OVAs, and not the manga... thats the bare minimum but still acceptable. You know of Millenium, of Iscariot, and of Hellsing`s conflict, the rest we can tell you.
From me, its an approval.. barely. Yeah, i´m harsh.
Apps: 3
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:16 pm | |
| This is pretty good though I advise you get a photo up in your Avatar section of your profile of what this guy looks like or close to what he looks like. Also something that nags a little at me is this little bit: - Quote :
- Standing at a five foot eleven Zanoko doesn't stand out among much of the other people.
and, - Quote :
- Weighing at a mere 100lbs Zanoko is easily maneuverable. He sports an athletic build. If he takes his shirt off there is visible his abs, and a scar that spans from his right shoulder across his back to his left waist.
in your physical description section. Reason is that we try to base this RP to reality without being in reality as close as we possibly can. With that stated I can say this: the fact that the human bone muscle mass to height ratio does not support what you put down for what I have quoted. Instead of a nice hunk of lean meat as you tried to state here with the statement of visible abs, since he weighs 100 pounds I think of a scrawny five foot eleven inch tall man. So just add 60 - 80 pounds on him and he can still be as maneuverable as you intend him to be, or if you want to keep him to about 100 pounds, you might have to shrink his height to (I am not kidding you I know the math to this), 5 foot 3 inches at least if not shorter and still have him be maneuverable. I say add more weight and I will approve you in a snap. |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:27 pm | |
| I changed the weight, also I added a pic and a little to his appearance. - Quote :
- He also has a cross shaped scar below his left eye.
For the most part this is what he looks like. Though the clothing is down below. Also, he has on occasion worn this attire.
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:34 pm | |
| Good work!
Approvals: 4 Dis-Approvals: zer0
Lock, dropped and moved. Welcome. |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:48 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Zanoko Sakuito's application Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:06 am | |
| Moved to dis-approved due to the fact that a 'guest' account made this, and it has been marked WIP for some time.
Locked and dropped. |
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