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PostSubject: Lenka Update (Reworked)   Lenka Update (Reworked) EmptySat Aug 02, 2014 1:06 pm

Ability Update: Exhaustion/Pollution regeneration: Cells exhausted or destroyed by drug/toxin interference are infinitely replaced, and drugs and toxins filtered out, however making his blood laced with toxins. (Though if he isn't exposed to any drugs, poisonous substances, or the like, his body will filter everything out after anywhere from two weeks to two months, depending on the amount of substances consumed. For example, he's still working all the toxins out of his body from the large amount of exposure during his employment at Cartel TF. (Where he also inherited this mutation through the involuntary consumption of all the laced cocaine in the air. The ability also renders him inable to become intoxicated, however he still experiences the heightened awareness of using some drugs if under their influence, but without the negative effects. (Ex: Overdosing, which is now impossible.) It does not give him regeneration from wounds, increase his strength, durability, or similar attributes.
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PostSubject: Re: Lenka Update (Reworked)   Lenka Update (Reworked) EmptySat Aug 02, 2014 6:05 pm

Ok. This is a little better as you have a description but you aren't mentioning which side effects this is ignoring which I've repeatedly been asking about. As a whole, I'm not agreeing with it simply because you're saying he can't OD on it which sounds dangerously close to being overpowered depending on what the effect is. I can understand a resistance to it but to the adverse as well. A human body can reject a drug from repeated exposure but it can gain a resistance to the boost too. I can appreciate that you're wanting to add flavor to your character Lenks and I see what you're trying to get at but at least for me, I need a helluva lot more. I need references, I need reasons, I need consequences, SP used...something other than "It makes him like Combi" or "It renders him unable to become intoxicated".

For me, it's now a total disapproval. I'm sorry kiddo.

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PostSubject: Re: Lenka Update (Reworked)   Lenka Update (Reworked) EmptySat Aug 09, 2014 10:48 am

I think you need to do a little more research as well. It does not mean that this does not have a shot, but you really need to research your stuff out. If it helps any, try looking for something that has been proven to help with "intoxication prevention." Then tweak it a little (because this site is horror/action/fiction). In other words, it does not have to be exactly like Combi; you can make something of your own for this oc.

Keep lookin' and workin' hard. But for now, I need to disapprove this.

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PostSubject: Re: Lenka Update (Reworked)   Lenka Update (Reworked) EmptySat Aug 16, 2014 5:53 pm

We need more info on how this works exactly, you can't simply not over dose on drugs. If you take too much or its too strong you will od.

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