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Name: Chad “Hawk Eye” Baxter
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Physical appearance: Chad has slicked back black hair, which is mostly spiky. He has an angular face. He has emerald eyes. His arm muscles are well toned, which is helpful in keeping his rifle still. He is 5'11". His chest is slightly toned, but otherwise still giving him a very slim appearance. His legs are strongly built. He has a white skin tone.
Clothing of choice: He tends to wear all black clothing consisting of a gray T-Shirt overlaid with a black vest with 6 pockets filled with sniper rounds. He wears gray cargo pants usually with the legs on. He wears black military boots. He tends to wear a pair of sunglasses at all times.
Weaponry of choice: He carries around a Barrett XM109 Sniper Rifle slung over his shoulder and a Beretta Px4 Storm pistol holstered at his right side.
Race: Human
Abilities: He has extraordinary eyesight, focus, and precision. Has perfect 20/20 vision. His focus can almost never be broken. His precision allows him to shoot a bottle cap off of a bottle from the farthest possible distance on the first try.
Organization: Wild Geese Mercenaries, and by extension, Hellsing.
Personality: Chad is not the quietest of people, tending to burst out into laughter during a very serious conversation. Though during combat, he is as quiet as a church mouse. He can be quite cocky as well due to his great sniping abilities. He doesn’t take the lead on missions, or even jump at the chance. He prefers to take orders in the field considering it usually leads to a kill. He can usually be seen hanging around with whats left of the Wild Geese after their mission to the Knights of the Damned castle. He also carries around enough headsets for the entirety of the Wild Geese so that they can keep in contact with each other.
Rank: Mercenary
Biography:
Chad Baxter was born and raised in the United Kingdom. He grew up mostly in London, spending most of his time either in the park, or practicing his aiming using a slingshot.
As he got older, Chad started to want to be a professional sniper in the British military. At the age of 15, his parents went out of their way to buy him a brand new sniper rifle model. Every day for the next 3 years, he would go out into the English countryside and practice sniping on the local wildlife. Mostly deer. His focus was astounding, and his precision was amazing. He almost never missed a target. Then again, they hardly ever moved.
At the age of 18, Chad joined up for the British Armed Forces. There, he became one of the military’s best snipers in 3 years. One day, his squad was tasked with taking down a terrorist organization that had taken up refuge inside an abandoned mining complex. Their trip turned sour not long after their arrival. These were no terrorists. It was a nest of vampires. One by one and very quickly, his squad was picked off. Because of his distance, Chad was able to put 4 of the 5 vampires down with quick and precise rounds to the heart and head. The 5th one, however, reached him. The vampire knocked away his rifle and swiped his pistol away. Just as it was about to deal the finishing blow, a lone shot rang out from the forest canopy. The vampires head burst and its body fell limp to the ground. A man stepped out of the woods holding an assault rifle in his hand. He said he was part of an elite group of mercenaries called the Wild Geese and offered Chad a position within them. Chad retrieved his sniper rifle and pistol, holstering both, and shook the man’s hand, accepting the offer.
Half a year later, Chad is a respected member of the Wild Geese Mercenaries. His precision and focus have earned him the nick name, Hawk Eye. Though he utterly hates vampires for killing his whole squad, he quite likes Hellsings vampires.
RP sample:
Echo Five was being sent on a mission to eliminate a suspected terrorist operation in an abandoned mine north of London. Chad hung out of the helicopters left doorway, sitting on the edge cleaning his rifle. The helicopter cleared the tallest section of trees. The mine was in sight now. “Drop us off down their! We’ll make the rest of the way on foot!” The helicopter slowed and moved down into the forest. They lowered rappelling lines down to the forest floor since the chopper couldn’t land in the dense forest. The slid down the ropes and hit the ground. There boots making a thud. The ropes retracted back up into the helicopter and it flew off back towards the base not far from their current position. They made their way through the dense forest, jumping over rocks and streams. Chad took up a position high up in the hills that looked down on the mining area. The rest of his team was already closing in on the mine entrance. He watched as they entered the complex. 5 minutes passed, and Chad could hear gunshots from inside the cave. They were shortly followed by screams. 5 more minutes passed, and finally a man emerged. It wasn’t one of his men. The man was quickly followed by 4 others who came running out of the cave.
He stared down the scope of his rifle as one of the vampires spotted him. The round spun through the air and smashed into the vampires head, which burst apart in a gory splash. Now alerted to his location, the other vampires sprinted his way. He let off 3 more rounds. 2 impacted into 2 of the vampires hearts. The third round tore the thirds head clear off of his shoulder. The remaining vampire jumped up into the air. Chad pulled the trigger on his rifle, but nothing came out. “Shit! Out of ammo!” The vampire landed on top of him. It smacked the sniper rifle away. Chad drew his pistol and aimed. The vampire smacked the pistol away with incredible speed. The vampire opened its jaw and raised its head up high, getting ready to bite his neck. A shot rang out from the canopy above. The vampires eye’s twitched as the round tore through its skull. Its head burst into tiny fragments.
Chad got up and fetched his rifle, slung it over his back, then picked up his pistol, which he holstered. He looked over to where the shot had come from. A man holding a marksman rifle stepped out of the forest. Chad heard the man tell him that he was part of a group of mercenaries known as the Wild Geese. He offered Chad a chance to join them. Chad thought about it for a minute, then reached out and shook the man’s hand.
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