Neko Jay (Killed by Michel, blown to pieces)

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Name: Jason Anderson Yule, Neko Jay

Age: 18, he looks sixteen ish

Gender: Male

Physical appearance: A young looking vampire, he still looks like the idiot that he Wes when he was bitten, he is '6' 10 inches tall he has the usual vampire pale skin and red eyes, he has pitch black spiky hair with cat ears to complete the hole neko thing in his name. His body is average at best no big muscles or scars, etc.

Clothing of choice: Jays clothes change quite a bit, recently he has been wearing a shirt with a black tie, black baggy trousers and black trainers. He likes to wear about anything expect women's clothes, obviously...he is a man.

Weaponry of choice: A katana that he created from himself, the blade is something strong as steel, the blade is 23 inches long 1 inch wide, he handle is 6 inches, Jay can fix it when it gets damaged though it takes time depending on damage, if the blade is completely destroyed he can't fix it, (it takes 5 posts to fix fully)


Race: Vampire Catagory B

Abilities: Regeneration may take short time for major damage (ie: 5 posts), large supernatural strength, agility, stamina, durability, and reflexes, can summon familiars, absorb memories, hypnotize those of low will power, low weakness to silver and blessed weaponry, susceptible to decapitation or stake to the heart (at this point, thats the most effective way to kill them but other severely damaging methods would work, conventional as well), levitation (for some), teleportation, ability to turn virgins into vampires, the need to drink blood once every two weeks.

He has three familiars First: Omega a white wolf with a dark spot on its forehead. A calm and reasonable wolf Second: Chaos a black wolf with a white spot on its head. A angry, brash, idiot and very aggressive wolf. Third: Laddie a hellhound who is rather..dumb, he will jump in front of grenades, bullets etc.

He can summon swords at most 12 at one time through this seriously speeds up his need to drink blood and puts him in a tired state.

Restrain 1: Doubles his stenght or speed at the cost of the other i.e. doudles speed but has half strength

Restrain 2: allows him full use of familiars i.e. being able to summon all three at once and have them battle ready

Organization: Hellsing

Personality: He is rather uh 'dumb' when it comes ot most things, he is a nice guy he just loves to annoy some people especially Sera's. He had split personalities but lost then became closest to being sane he could and lost them.
He likes girls, blood and animals, currently he has an issue with social contact with some people especially if its a girl who is cute.

In fights he is reliable and focused, he doesn't get too bloodthirsty he does like the odd quick drink in battle if he needs to do it, he likes medium to close range battles and knows ways to get close to an enemy i.e. using Laddie as a distraction.

Rank: Vampire Hunter

Biography: At a young age he witnessed his mother and father being eaten by werewolves he hid but one of the werewolves saw him and must of though of him as nothing and just left him, after the incident he was sent to an orphanage. He had sever mental troma, his mind repressed the memories but a small 'darkness' was born in him, a little voice that usually swayed him to do the wrong thing.

When he was thirteen he was walking home on night, and out of no where he was impaled by a sword it was a sword from a vampire known as Levis who would later take part in Jays life, at that time a vampire named Cassandra bitten Jay to save him, she saw his will to live and something of a son in him. When he awoke he was in a cave and then he was hugged by Cassandra, she almost smothered him to dead.

He met Des and they stared to train, through the 3 years he lived with them he had good times, bad times and rather weird times, this was his family for a short while until his power went hay wire one night. He fought with Cassandra who knocked him out and put restrains on him and left.
After explaining to Jay Cassandra left, so did he soon after Jay left to join Hellsing a while later.

During his time in Hellsing he has developed split personalities, pissed off Seras countless times , almost had his heart ripped out by Seras ,fought the werewolf who killed his family , he and Tod(fellow Hellsing member) pranked the helipad but Jay went crazy and the two fought, then went to afghan went crazy again this time he 'fought his inner darkness' Levis the vampire who accidentally impaled him and implanted a part of his soul into Jay giving him the knowledge to summon swords and past. Levis took control of Jay then he and Jays personalities disappeared after Jay became 'Sane'.


RP sample: A hooded man ran through an old warehouse, he kicked down the door and ran out side, he stoped and tunred around quickly looking up at the full moon, a shadowy figure with cat ears Oy the shadowy figure shouted How long ya gonna keep runin ? The hooded man trembled with fear at the figuer Y..you who are you his voice trembled slightly he was trying to act tough nothing more.
The figure jumped off the building then stopped half way A vampire just like you just one difrence he slowly drew his katana from his side I'm gonna live longer.

The hooded vampire couldn't belive his eyes, for hours he was being chased by a young teen with cat ears W..what the fuck..a..a kid he gritted his teeth in anger DON'T MAKE FUN OF ME he scremed out in anger, then blindly charged at Jay, he tensed his legs and jumped up into the air as high as Jay was. Damn you stupid Jay seemed to make no movement, when the vampire landed onto the ground his arm fell off W..wha..WHAT THE HELL Jay was already behind the vampire.

Its over he periced the vampires heart with his katana, blood dripped down the vampires chest as he died and then fell to the ground, Jay simply slashed his katana, blood sprayed off it Damn I was hopin to waste some time he sheathed his katana and then walked away calling to confirm he finished his job.

Ok couple things to work on here.

1) " the blade is 13 inches long 1 inch wide" <== that's not a katana dude. that's barely a short sword.

2) 200 swords at once = no. I can see like 10-12 and they should be delicate. Maybe compare them to razor sharp shards of glass. Obviousely dangerous but also brittle.

3) the 3rd restraint with the True Nos like abilities has gotta go dude. That's just way too much.

4) As for the first restraint I would prefer if you balanced it a bit more. Like he can double his strength but then he's only half as fast as his base state. Or vice-cersa, see what I'm saying there?

Anyway, take care of this stuff and we'll see how he looks.

Edited

The 3rd Restraint still bothers me. You're a Cat B vamp so you should have Cat B abilities. I don't like this whole "approaches Cat A for 8 posts thing". Second, spikey hair and bat wing/claws? Dude seriousely, you get pissed when people compare your character to Sasuke but then you give him the Curse Mark Stage 2! It sounds like a bad crossover, so I can't let it go man. Outside of the 3rd Restraint it all looks pretty good.

(May i also adress that fixing carbon steel, or even silver in one minute is beyond the physical limitations.. unless it magically glues itself back together?)

Edited

Alright. Since you completely removed Restraint 3, I think it is safe to say everything looks good.

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Disapprovals: 0

Thank you for making those edits Jay.

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